My shiney teeth that twinkle!

Kriven Administrator Head Judge Peek-a-Boo Posts: 482	My shiney teeth that twinkle! Nov 8, 2010 22:23:59 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kriven on Nov 8, 2010 22:23:59 GMT -5 Just like the stars in space!
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toby Submission Judge Grammar Nazi Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away! Posts: 576	My shiney teeth that twinkle! Nov 9, 2010 0:18:32 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by toby on Nov 9, 2010 0:18:32 GMT -5 MORE WIN!
	As resident Grammar Nazi I feel this must be shared. Pay attention, kiddies. "There's a difference between Mb and MB, hence why capitalization is very important. (Another example is I helped my uncle jack off a horse vs I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse.)" Moral of the story: Capitalization goes a long way.

Kriven Administrator Head Judge Peek-a-Boo Posts: 482	My shiney teeth that twinkle! Nov 9, 2010 0:32:45 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kriven on Nov 9, 2010 0:32:45 GMT -5

toby Submission Judge Grammar Nazi Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away! Posts: 576	My shiney teeth that twinkle! Nov 9, 2010 11:11:15 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by toby on Nov 9, 2010 11:11:15 GMT -5 not as good
	As resident Grammar Nazi I feel this must be shared. Pay attention, kiddies. "There's a difference between Mb and MB, hence why capitalization is very important. (Another example is I helped my uncle jack off a horse vs I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse.)" Moral of the story: Capitalization goes a long way.