toby
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Grammar Nazi
Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away!
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Love
Mar 16, 2011 20:03:15 GMT -5
Post by toby on Mar 16, 2011 20:03:15 GMT -5
May or may not've been in a normal state of mind Here's what came out: I've written you so many poems I've sang you love songs But you may never know The feelings I feel for you I smile, I'm happy, whenever you're near A mention of my name sets my soul ablaze You surround yourself with people How I wish you wouldn't You say the gap's too far You say you'd rather not I say it's neither too far Nor too futile
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