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Post by Kriven on Feb 23, 2011 15:07:54 GMT -5
A high pitch giggling sound erupted from the toilet, relieving James of his need for bathroom but proposing a new need for pants.
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Post by Dr.lightbulb on Feb 27, 2011 22:56:19 GMT -5
Then the mirror shattered when james looked at it!
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Post by Scotty on Feb 28, 2011 11:48:18 GMT -5
The giggling continued and James ran out of the bathroom, cutting his feel on the shards that fell from the mirror.
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Post by toby on Feb 28, 2011 17:33:24 GMT -5
He fell to the bedroom floor, screaming in pain.
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Post by NinjaElephant on Feb 28, 2011 17:37:29 GMT -5
Before his eyes, hundred of small, black spiders began scurrying out of his fresh wounds, their tiny legs felt by every inch of his skin.
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Post by Dr.lightbulb on Feb 28, 2011 22:37:30 GMT -5
The spiders then went to the toilet and jumped in swiming to where toilets go.
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Post by toby on Feb 28, 2011 23:51:42 GMT -5
He rubbed his eyes, then looked up at the dresser and the painkillers sitting there, and suddenly he remembered.
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Post by Dr.lightbulb on Mar 6, 2011 1:09:10 GMT -5
He has to take 4 pills every morning!!!
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Post by Kriven on Mar 14, 2011 14:48:12 GMT -5
But he accidentally knocked the bottle off the counter, and watched in horror as it popped open, pouring pills into the potty.
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Post by toby on Mar 14, 2011 15:09:48 GMT -5
He fished, but to no avail; they disintegrated in the water.
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Post by Dr.lightbulb on Mar 19, 2011 22:13:19 GMT -5
The toilet water then started to change colors!
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Post by toby on Mar 20, 2011 12:24:10 GMT -5
He really needed the medication, so he grabbed a cup and scooped out some of the water, swirling it around in the container; was this really a good idea?
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Post by Scotty on Mar 24, 2011 12:58:39 GMT -5
Quickly, he pulled his hands out of the water and looked at the colors dripping off his hands, reviling that he had no hands anymore.
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Post by Dr.lightbulb on Mar 26, 2011 22:16:23 GMT -5
Am I hallucinating? James quickly thought.
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Post by toby on Mar 27, 2011 15:10:25 GMT -5
Then the pain set in, the new stumps delivering what felt like lightning bolts up his arms.
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