Coninue-A Da Story!

Kriven Administrator Head Judge Peek-a-Boo Posts: 482	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 13, 2011 16:48:16 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kriven on Feb 13, 2011 16:48:16 GMT -5 James gazed up at the clouds, watching with anticipation.

toby Submission Judge Grammar Nazi Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away! Posts: 576	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 13, 2011 21:18:33 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by toby on Feb 13, 2011 21:18:33 GMT -5 He never could get over how green they were.
	As resident Grammar Nazi I feel this must be shared. Pay attention, kiddies. "There's a difference between Mb and MB, hence why capitalization is very important. (Another example is I helped my uncle jack off a horse vs I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse.)" Moral of the story: Capitalization goes a long way.

Dr.lightbulb N00bsauce Posts: 54	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 13, 2011 23:04:23 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dr.lightbulb on Feb 13, 2011 23:04:23 GMT -5 and how they where raining pink lolipops.

Scotty lvl 6 Pastamancer I'm Commander Shepard and this is my favorite forum on the internet! Posts: 305	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 14, 2011 7:42:25 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Scotty on Feb 14, 2011 7:42:25 GMT -5 He picked up one of the lollipops and licked it

Kriven Administrator Head Judge Peek-a-Boo Posts: 482	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 14, 2011 7:48:27 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kriven on Feb 14, 2011 7:48:27 GMT -5 Despite it's sweet, pink color the lollipop tasted bitter.

Dr.lightbulb N00bsauce Posts: 54	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 18, 2011 23:36:05 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dr.lightbulb on Feb 18, 2011 23:36:05 GMT -5 Then the lollipop transformed in to a pink grasshopper.

toby Submission Judge Grammar Nazi Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away! Posts: 576	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 20, 2011 0:08:27 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by toby on Feb 20, 2011 0:08:27 GMT -5 The grasshopper lunged at James.
	As resident Grammar Nazi I feel this must be shared. Pay attention, kiddies. "There's a difference between Mb and MB, hence why capitalization is very important. (Another example is I helped my uncle jack off a horse vs I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse.)" Moral of the story: Capitalization goes a long way.

Scotty lvl 6 Pastamancer I'm Commander Shepard and this is my favorite forum on the internet! Posts: 305	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 20, 2011 12:02:16 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Scotty on Feb 20, 2011 12:02:16 GMT -5 James evaded and ran away screaming like a little girl.

Kriven Administrator Head Judge Peek-a-Boo Posts: 482	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 20, 2011 13:02:42 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kriven on Feb 20, 2011 13:02:42 GMT -5 The grasshopper snickered, watching his victim rush off tails-between-his-legs.

Dr.lightbulb N00bsauce Posts: 54	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 22, 2011 0:19:25 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dr.lightbulb on Feb 22, 2011 0:19:25 GMT -5 Then yellow clouds with green rain began to fall.

toby Submission Judge Grammar Nazi Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away! Posts: 576	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 22, 2011 0:23:51 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by toby on Feb 22, 2011 0:23:51 GMT -5 James opened his eyes, a yawn introducing his first statement of the day, "That was a fucked up dream..."
	As resident Grammar Nazi I feel this must be shared. Pay attention, kiddies. "There's a difference between Mb and MB, hence why capitalization is very important. (Another example is I helped my uncle jack off a horse vs I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse.)" Moral of the story: Capitalization goes a long way.

Dr.lightbulb N00bsauce Posts: 54	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 22, 2011 0:27:30 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dr.lightbulb on Feb 22, 2011 0:27:30 GMT -5 James looked out the window and saw a small grasshopper looking at him then the small incect jumped out to the yard.

Kriven Administrator Head Judge Peek-a-Boo Posts: 482	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 22, 2011 0:51:26 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kriven on Feb 22, 2011 0:51:26 GMT -5 To James' horror, a yellow bus zipped by.

Scotty lvl 6 Pastamancer I'm Commander Shepard and this is my favorite forum on the internet! Posts: 305	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 23, 2011 7:41:32 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Scotty on Feb 23, 2011 7:41:32 GMT -5 the missed the bus, and there was a field trip to the beer factory today!

toby Submission Judge Grammar Nazi Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away! Posts: 576	Coninue-A Da Story! Feb 23, 2011 10:44:20 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by toby on Feb 23, 2011 10:44:20 GMT -5 "Oh well," he thought. He slowly got out of bed and shuffled into the bathroom to prepare for the day ahead.
	As resident Grammar Nazi I feel this must be shared. Pay attention, kiddies. "There's a difference between Mb and MB, hence why capitalization is very important. (Another example is I helped my uncle jack off a horse vs I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse.)" Moral of the story: Capitalization goes a long way.