You guys make me sad.

toby
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Grammar Nazi

Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away!

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You guys make me sad. Feb 6, 2011 21:17:05 GMT -5

Post by toby on Feb 6, 2011 21:17:05 GMT -5

I thought we could have a great time here. I thought I could post stuff here and people would tell me what they thought. We even attracted some people outside our little clan. But now, where has everyone gone? I know even I haven't written much lately, but I'm working on it. Scott's been posting. But really, where did you all go? Why did you leave? :'(

I don't know anymore. Sure, we had a great start, but now I feel like you don't even care. It hurts. I think I need to go write a sad poem in my journal, but I won't be moving on anytime soon. TWC, you'll be in my homepage list for a long time. I just wish other people would say the same.

As resident Grammar Nazi I feel this must be shared. Pay attention, kiddies.

"There's a difference between Mb and MB, hence why capitalization is very important. (Another example is I helped my uncle jack off a horse vs I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse.)"

Moral of the story: Capitalization goes a long way.

Dr.lightbulb N00bsauce Posts: 54	You guys make me sad. Feb 6, 2011 23:04:20 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dr.lightbulb on Feb 6, 2011 23:04:20 GMT -5 Sigh, dude some of us have been checking up on this site every day man for the new stuff. Were all just busy.

Kriven
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You guys make me sad. Feb 7, 2011 0:07:30 GMT -5

Post by Kriven on Feb 7, 2011 0:07:30 GMT -5

We need to find some middle schoolers and train them in the ways of grammar. Middle schoolers are always active forumites.

Edit: Using this thread to warn people that I'm going to be shrinking the avatar size back to its default at some point this thread. This note is because I'm a thread-whore.

Last Edit: Feb 7, 2011 0:08:16 GMT -5 by Kriven

Scotty lvl 6 Pastamancer I'm Commander Shepard and this is my favorite forum on the internet! Posts: 305	You guys make me sad. Feb 7, 2011 14:09:10 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Scotty on Feb 7, 2011 14:09:10 GMT -5 I JUST GOT MENTIONED IN A POSITIVE WAY?!

Lost It's-a Me-a! the lost butterfly Posts: 81	You guys make me sad. Feb 21, 2011 8:25:47 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lost on Feb 21, 2011 8:25:47 GMT -5 I stopped coming here because it wasn't active enough and no one ever talked to me in the chatbox =(
	Far away, without a way, Far into the skies of grey, She flies high into the sky, With all the tears she cries gone dry. She does not know why, why she tries, But on in the sky she flies, On flies the Lost Butterfly.

Post by toby on Feb 6, 2011 21:17:05 GMT -5

Post by Dr.lightbulb on Feb 6, 2011 23:04:20 GMT -5

Post by Kriven on Feb 7, 2011 0:07:30 GMT -5

Post by Scotty on Feb 7, 2011 14:09:10 GMT -5

Post by Lost on Feb 21, 2011 8:25:47 GMT -5