toby
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Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away!
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Mushin
Jan 7, 2011 0:11:44 GMT -5
Post by toby on Jan 7, 2011 0:11:44 GMT -5
I kneel on the floor Close my eyes And suddenly...
The world is white. Empty. I feel emotion within me
It rises from my gut, squeezing past my heart. Into my head.
It leaks out All of it The pain The fear The joy
And suddenly I am clean
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