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Post by Kriven on Dec 31, 2010 22:53:37 GMT -5
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toby
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Post by toby on Jan 1, 2011 0:38:05 GMT -5
darthjoe229.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d358tjm~Regret~ By: Andrew Wood Late at night I lay and think I reminisce about the nostalgic days of old Who am I kidding, that was just a few years ago But it seems like Forever I miss it Your face Your hair Your laugh You know who you are And probably won't read this I've moved on Haven't I? Why do you come back Late at night As I lie here You haunt me And always shall What I did can never be undone Thankfully Right? I'll never replace you But someday someone else will take your place And life will once again be right The Yin will have Yang, and balance will take hold Balance is good Isn't it? So here I find myself Longing to jump forward So I can find the other you Wishing to leap back So I can find you again But all I can do is wait. And regret.
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Post by NinjaElephant on Jan 1, 2011 19:32:27 GMT -5
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