Yet another piece in which I use repetition

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jsnowdon
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Yet another piece in which I use repetition Dec 27, 2010 21:11:31 GMT -5

Post by jsnowdon on Dec 27, 2010 21:11:31 GMT -5

let me go back
for five minutes.
let me walk through
the past.
let me relive
my memories.
let me take a
second look at what
I now cannot
remember.
let me close my eyes
and breathe.
let me be happy.
let me go back
for five minutes.
let me say
goodbye.

Last Edit: Dec 28, 2010 19:40:40 GMT -5 by jsnowdon

toby Submission Judge Grammar Nazi Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away! Posts: 576	Yet another piece in which I use repetition Dec 27, 2010 23:01:30 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by toby on Dec 27, 2010 23:01:30 GMT -5 Never mind the poem's awesomeness, I absolutely love the title here.
	As resident Grammar Nazi I feel this must be shared. Pay attention, kiddies. "There's a difference between Mb and MB, hence why capitalization is very important. (Another example is I helped my uncle jack off a horse vs I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse.)" Moral of the story: Capitalization goes a long way.