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toby
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Grammar Nazi

Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away!

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Invisible tanks. You want to see this. Jan 13, 2011 0:43:57 GMT -5

Post by toby on Jan 13, 2011 0:43:57 GMT -5

As resident Grammar Nazi, I have been incredibly lax in my duties. If this inexcusable behavior continues, I shall be forced to take immediate and severe action. Please remember that when I judge, it is solely in the interest of improving your writing.

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Thank you.

As resident Grammar Nazi I feel this must be shared. Pay attention, kiddies.

"There's a difference between Mb and MB, hence why capitalization is very important. (Another example is I helped my uncle jack off a horse vs I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse.)"

Moral of the story: Capitalization goes a long way.

Lost It's-a Me-a! the lost butterfly Posts: 81	Invisible tanks. You want to see this. Jan 24, 2011 15:38:04 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lost on Jan 24, 2011 15:38:04 GMT -5 So cool! ^.^
	Far away, without a way, Far into the skies of grey, She flies high into the sky, With all the tears she cries gone dry. She does not know why, why she tries, But on in the sky she flies, On flies the Lost Butterfly.

Kriven Administrator Head Judge Peek-a-Boo Posts: 482	Invisible tanks. You want to see this. Jan 30, 2011 16:46:38 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kriven on Jan 30, 2011 16:46:38 GMT -5 Saw that in Time for Kids a looooonnnng time ago. If only I had the money ;-;

toby Submission Judge Grammar Nazi Much of my writing is from my English class free writes, so critique away! Posts: 576	Invisible tanks. You want to see this. Jan 30, 2011 21:20:19 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by toby on Jan 30, 2011 21:20:19 GMT -5 Jan 30, 2011 16:46:38 GMT -5 Kriven said: If only I had the money ;-; Story of my life.
	As resident Grammar Nazi I feel this must be shared. Pay attention, kiddies. "There's a difference between Mb and MB, hence why capitalization is very important. (Another example is I helped my uncle jack off a horse vs I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse.)" Moral of the story: Capitalization goes a long way.

Invisible tanks. You want to see this.

Post by toby on Jan 13, 2011 0:43:57 GMT -5

Post by Lost on Jan 24, 2011 15:38:04 GMT -5

Post by Kriven on Jan 30, 2011 16:46:38 GMT -5

Post by toby on Jan 30, 2011 21:20:19 GMT -5