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Post by Kriven on Dec 3, 2010 23:16:59 GMT -5
T'was the Night Before Presents
I lay in bed In the dead of night Waiting for sleep Waiting for him Waiting for tomorrow When there will be gifts Games and toys and pie Oh boy I love tomorrow I love it so Suddenly a thump A clatter and a crack The tinkle of bells Powdered snow falls from the roof And sprinkles the yard Like a sugar donut It’s him! He’s here! Can I see him? Can I say “hi?” There’s a noise downstairs The creeping of feet The rustle of a bag The guzzling of milk I slip out of bed Shiver in the cold My breath slips away in whispered puffs But I can’t be deterred I must be tough! Into the hall, I tip on my toes Down the stairs Through the kitchen And then at last, he’s come to sight The coat, big, red and bold Is unmistakable The sack at his feet is filled with toys And games and cakes and other joys His stomach bubbles and wobbles Like a bowl full of jelly His beard is long And smooth And silver Like the bells on his boots And the trim of his coat He looks at me Eyes wide with delight A smile splits his humble, pink face And I see now that the prints on the floor are not snow but Blood And the toys in the sack are not plastic or tin But tooth, and bone, and torn bits of skin The gifts by the tree Are packaged like meat I take a step back He takes one forward Eyes glinting blue and green Like the lights wrapped about the tree He holds out his hand All sticky and wet Chuckles real softly and says “Merry Christmas to you, My dear little boy. Come look in this bag, I’ve got you a toy.”
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Post by Lost on Dec 3, 2010 23:18:39 GMT -5
NIGHTMARES!
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Post by toby on Dec 3, 2010 23:22:16 GMT -5
MY CHILDHOOD! GIVE IT BACK!
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Post by NinjaElephant on Dec 3, 2010 23:22:18 GMT -5
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Post by toby on Dec 3, 2010 23:23:10 GMT -5
+1 because that is so incredibly relevant
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Post by NinjaElephant on Dec 3, 2010 23:48:34 GMT -5
MY CHILDHOOD! GIVE IT BACK!
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Post by Kriven on Dec 3, 2010 23:49:23 GMT -5
Your kind words fills my heart with joy!
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Post by toby on Dec 4, 2010 0:24:14 GMT -5
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